poor taste and judgement for uploading this
there you go
it sound a lot better now. good job man.
i think your gettin low votes cause its got a hip hop beat.
newgrounds is a bunch of hip hop haters. :/
its sick tho man love the guitar. keep it up.
Dam thanks for the review pimpin.
Im definantely digging this shit. Its fresh, unique, and well never been done before.
Cut down on all the snare hits tho. Its a little too much do it every 4 or 8 bars.
The only other problem is sampling WOW or whatever and i doubt you could ever make a real song with this. Cause youd see a lawsuit comin your way.
Otherwise very fresh. I wanna see more from you.
P.S. im glad you liked my song. If you like that one you should go check out "In the Night"
glad you dig bro... not to much to this song, yeah too much snare not enough care... other then that thanks for digging the song
Excellent recording quality and very... metal.
Not really a crunk beat just yet.
Take out the synth pads.
Use a higher pitch snare when doing the roll.
Go up one octave on the synth and add slide to it.
Take out the thunderstorms ha.
Otherwise not bad. Keep it up.
Oh lol, i was trying to go for crunk, just a hip-hop beat.
I dont really know what crunk ,eans other than south-ish hip-hop. :P lololol
I like the synth pads thoooooo :(
Yea i though something was wrong with the snare.
Which synth, the intro synth or the main melody?
Rly? I thot the thunderstorms were a nice touch :(
Thanks a lot man i REAAALLLY appreciate the crits.
I could see this being a chilli peppers song.
Sweet keep it up!
I like the ambient noises and animals in background I think they preety much MAKE the song if you know what im saying. It wouldnt stand out like it does witout them.
Very nice tho keep it up.
thanks, i see what you mean. thanks for the review
Your effort paid of brother. Very nice.
Reminds me of Miami for some reason but anyway the synth is very suttle yet still energetic.
I think the riff at the end could also be put in the middle somewhere and wit a heavier kick that would be sweat.
But its great the way it is keep up the good work!
thanks for the response practice does make better lol i will take what u said onboard cheers
not bad. the guitar is good.
but sing LOUDER! and turn up the HI on your EQ when recording your voice your getting too much MID commin through.
Thanks for the advice, man. I really am new to equalizing and what not as well, so this is actually just a test to see how well I could do it.
I actually am recording on like an old 1990's apple mic not meant for shit like this.
But I de-noised the shit out of it. I EQ-ed the voice some but not enough.
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